Help!!

please I need someone who will volunteer to help me edit my manuscript..
I just started writing in order to at least distract myself from viewing porn or masturbating and I need someone to guide me.

thanks

 

are you saying u going to help?

 

romance actually..
I need someone who can help me compose my sentences very well, am really good at that. in short, I need someone to guide me

 

I mean am not really good at composing sentences

 

no...
I wrote a script about romance

 

all I want is for someone to read and tell me what am not getting right.