Today I wrote a book, I don't think I should continue writing it anymore...

I woke up today and I had this wonderful idea of writing this noir drama detective book set in the 'cyberpunk' future. The book I wrote is a fictional novel and I've wrote 20 pages so far.

The story is simple, It's about an undercover detective entering an industrial city set in future (2060) when robots and AI is the trend and the ear is known as 'Robotic Era'. From a storyteller's point of view I wanted the reader to really realize how dreary, sick and depressing this city was.

The main income generating sectors of this city was Industrial companies, Agriculture and Prostitution.

As the era is robotic, the city's brothels also have "robotic prostitutes" or cheaply made robotic sex dolls as backups for in case of a hiring surge. Other monstrous things like human trafficking, forced sexual slavery/prostitution, drugs and crimes have also been included in the characteristics of this city.

This was just when I begin to realize that I'm reflecting the thing which have been present in my mind for a long time. I don't know much about these crime operations, but due to Netflix and several other content streaming platforms, I've always wanted to write a crime fiction drama. But now I think Im just reflecting on the thought that go in my own head.

One could say that this fictional city maybe the representation of the filth present in my own head. "Stotsca" is all the bad things that go in my head. I've previously had fantasies about kidnapping and forced sexual slavery, which I had picked up from Porn. I honestly think that this is very sad and I want to get away from these negative fantasies.

So do suggest that I keep on writing about this crime-drama? Or should I drop it and focus on something else? Any suggestions are welcome.

 

I like the ideas you have for the book. If you have the time and can channelize the energy of your NoFap streak into creativity why not do so! I have also started writing now that I am on this fight, and I also struggle a lot with my writtings, it is normal I would say...distinguish that what you write about is not what you are and at the same time that you cannot write of something which isn't in you.

 

That makes a lot of sense. Thanks, I'll try continuing and see where it leads.

 

I think while writing the story I tried to constantly remind myself, that whatever scenes I think I might like adding to the book if they are unnecessary I will just drive them out of my mind and not think about them.

I haven't written a scene yet, but there's gonna be one when The Protagonist discovers a lead in the case, and It's not going to be a sex scene. I think I wouldn't want to include a sex scene in the book because it would feel forced or highly unnecessary. Just mentioning the stuff that the protagonist discovers while solving the case is enough to justify why the city is so dark.

Thanks for sharing your opinion and I'll try to keep my fantasies off the book but the imagination of a dull society in future inside the story.

 

I've always wanted to write a book, or some script. And I love creating stories. But everytime I tried to write a book or a screenplay I always thought that It's going to be perfect and I'm gonna be some Hollywood director/writer.

This time when I picked up the pen, I just wanted to spend time creatively and truly create something that was already fed to my imagination, but I wanted to express how dreadful it was. So maybe there's hope for this fiction story.

Thanks for taking the time and sharing your thoughts.

 

Yeah that's true, I would really be proud of just the fact that I wrote a book even If I never publish it.

I'll also portray how vicious these fantasies and imaginations are for the future society. Imagine a spoiled future where people stimulate themselves with VR porn just like it was mentioned in Cyberpunk 2077, if VR fantasy porn sees growth in the future, then all the kids are doomed.