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Venting Poetry?

Discussion in 'Rebooting - Porn Addiction Recovery' started by PrivatelyPursuingPatience, Mar 5, 2017.

  1. Is this a thing? I don't know. I had to throw something up, but didn't have any specific complaints at the moment... I just wanted to vent.

    I wasn't sure where to go, what was going on in my head,
    As I lay there staring at the ceiling I felt a tear twisting through my chest,
    The agony came first with the beating of my heart,
    The heat of blood, the pressure and the anger came second like a train;

    Rushing through my arteries, the artillery of anger flew through me,
    It threw me, my body, my mind and my soul against the storm of my own making,
    Angrily I looked towards it, ice and rain cutting through me, causing harm,
    'Til I realised the storm was merely me, my own creation come to take me,
    In the mirror I stared at the storm inside, the fog on glass, the deathly stare,
    The corpse reflected back at me, it's eyes were empty, black, bare;

    But as the realisation brought me deeper down, I found some minor comfort,
    My heart had no more complaints, no more ice to throw upon me,
    A peace came by and sat beside me, knew I'd be fine and faded by,
    The storm had passed and I could see the path that I should follow,
    A day new day dawn, the corpse will rise, slowly life returning to its eyes,
    Each day by day, he'll travel now, here unto the Morrow.
     
  2. ILoathePorn

    ILoathePorn Distinguished Fapstronaut

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    I like it. I believe it is very good to express what you are feeling and thinking. I think that poetry is a great way to do that. Stay strong!
     

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